well that was POOPOO.
Well, I understand it's your first attempt and everything, but, putting 1 drum loop in a song isn;t really worth the effort, no offence.
Try putting in bass, synth, and it will be ALL RIGHT! =D
Check my music if you have time.
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this shoulda taken you two seconds to make but it probably took you all day so 10 for effort
Haha it took one minute.