i like the beat to this one. also the echo bass in the backround is pretty sweet. don't use the fruity loop Speech Generator though...it really sucks and sounds really cheap. yea the song isnt very diverse though. the same echo sound, the same beat, as cool as it is. it gets boring after a while. and like the only thing that changes is the voice. work more on an actual melody, the bass would be a good backround. and when the melody changes, its pretty weird. doesnt really match the rest of song , pretty unoriginal melody though. i gotta give you some credit though, its not bad for your 3rd or 4th song.
i'll give you a 5 to show my support, and a download. good luck in the future. check out my song in the future if you ever have the time.
Thx dew some good advice allthough it was just a throw out sound and it incomplete
i think i might just pick it up again iuno yet