Truly amazing for a new artist.
I actually don't have the right to comment since my songs are worse, but here it is anyways:
Make the drums just a teeny bit louder.
Yeah that's all. I'm waiting for your next piece of music mate :) amazing job.
You sir, are the most underrated musician i've ever heard. You will indeed go on to make amazing songs, sir! ~Skiddle
Pretty good! Just wish you'd make your songs downloadable
Alright, not too bad. What's in the background at 00:19? The melody of that sound doesn't seem to match with the song. Risers are also too intense, when the drops should be more defining for the track. You have good format for the song, but it needs improvement. The high pitched part at 02:53 is too different. Your sounds have to blend into the track. When everything comes together at the end it sounds kind of nice. :D
After time your music should sound better. Just keep doing it, you'll see. Good luck!
PS my second song was shit (much much worse than this) so I think you'll get better!
Thanks a lot for your review m8 ;) I always try to do my best and with the practice and time i'll get better!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.