Interesting beat you have here, it sounds like one of my first pieces, which were pretty much learning pieces, I think you have the same here, pay attention to everything you learn in these beginner songs, truth be told I learn something new every song as well.
Enough with the story, lets get onto the song.
it has an interesting melody, definately overused though, do try to mix it up every once in a while, remember that layering layer after layer isn't going to make the song better, but it is great practice what you are doing. You added a few bass beats that were a tad overpowering, especially near the end, remember that the low end of a song is filled up rather quickly, and because they are so deep having multiple bass beats makes it all the harder to differentiate which one is doing what.
The progression of the song IS pretty interesting. For some early work this is excellent stuff Hellavon, keep them coming, everybody started off like this, only persistance landed them where they are now.
Keep them coming!!!
I'm actually rlly happy the remixes didn'nt turn out so well, shows me that I don't need to rip off someone's already made rifts to sound good. Thanks for appreciating my style guys. :) I'm talking about the remizes up above, u'll see.
i love the beat. i would really like to see a full version song of this.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.