Hey, what's up? I like this song, well thought out melody. I'm thinking we can do a collab, like work together for a full version. Just a few things I would improve...the drum loop that comes in sticks out, and when the chour hits the high note, it is off key. Email me this on an FL file, Xx_ChiRoN_xX@yahoo.com, I'm willing to work on it. Gave it a 5.
I'll send it to you ASAP with my gmail email. You'll know it's me when you see it.
Thanks for your time,
Good work my man!
This isn't too bad, you need to add in more diversity in this tune, that melody that plays for most of this piece, needs to change, it plays that same melody for just too long without much, if any of a change
Other than that, this is a pretty sweet sounding track, it's a bit short though too
Hit me back!
Thanks for the tips & review!
It's short because, well, it's just a demo. The full version will be done IF Xx-ChiRoN-xX likes this song enough to want to VS or be Featured.