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I think this has a little more than the last one, I hope it's good enough.


Pretty good.

Well, it kept a consistent beat, the melodies and fills were timed properly. It sounds good.

A good job this one.

Can you review a song of mine called Revival?

Thank you.


Good start!

I wouldn't say you're a noob at all! True you're not utilizing the effects as much or as well, but song structure, melody flow, and overall presentation, I found these all at acceptable levels! The percussional beats weren't revolutionairy, but they got the job done!

I can see you have some volume issues when that saw comes in, I don't know if you're using Fruity Studio's, but I thought I heard a choir preset that comes with that, so I will assume that is what you are using.

Be sure to use the compresser effect at all times, that keeps distortion at bay and makes sure the volume levels don't go out of bounds.

The melody of that saw was pretty enjoyable, but again it was the volume levels that didn't fare too well.

In either case, this was definately a pretty good track, Keep them coming! I hear a good deal of potential in you! I'd like to invite you to listen to some of my works sometime, thank you.

Tamas123 responds:

Than you very much. I tried to fix the volume before I submitted but without success. Thanks for liking the melody. I tried to go a little Teck071 style melody.

Pretty good

I wouldn't listen to that other guy, it wasn't that bad. Im sure your pretty new to this, but you seem pretty decent.

I really liked that main melody, but it was a bit distorted. The beat was fine. But the bass wasn't very powerful, and kind of annoying.

Overall it was decent song. Keep working at it and you'll be a great artist one day.


A review back would be appreciated^_^

Tamas123 responds:

Sorry about the distortion. I tried to fix it. I am really good at coming up with melodies. I hope I do become great. This review made my day. The melody took me 2 to 3 minutes to come up with.

Truly amatuer

Sounds very amateur

Tamas123 responds:

I started not too long ago. What did you expect?

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3.50 / 5.00

Nov 5, 2006
3:39 PM EST
File Info
2.1 MB
2 min 19 sec

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