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Coral New Beat

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Yo yo yo check it out, I walk up in da place with a giant bottle of sodapop, I slap the girl at the counter with a slappy hand from chuck-e-cheese, than I go and sip a 40 oz root beer at my moms house homie! Ima gangsta, my best friend at school said I was...

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I really liked the bassline....but then I realized.....its...the....same.....alll....the....way....through

>.<

Your bass is on point, but your drums are minimal, and thats me being nice about it, in other words they suck complete and total donkey dick!

I kept expecting some type of transition...but it just...never....fucking...came! AHHHH!

But, in your defense the bassline was really good and I love the sustain bass when it rolls like that, its great, if your drums would have rode with it better, you would have had a solid track, but I have to give it 2 out of 5 and I only give you that 2 because I loved the sustain bass, the synths you used don't really ride either and to top it off they are too much on the high end and they are out of tone with the pattern of the bassline which clashes with the mid and sub harmonics, and dude....for the love of GOD, watch some youtube tutorials for creating a solid 808 or 909 kick pattern, it would have made this track shine!

But in the future, I really do look forward to seeing some more come out of you, if you would like some advice, just send me a message and I will shoot you some zipped loops for FL that would definitely help you improve your game.

- VashElite

cursed666 responds:

Dude i fucken hate that it took me so long to notice this review lol

You are correct about a lot of that, i just relistened to this track and honestly, i don't feel like it's quite as bad as you say, but definitely needs work, hit me up with those loops and samples if you still have them.

Also, the drums are repetitive as fuck! How did you listen to this all the way through? XD

And the 808 was sampled, a terrible sample at that, i have better ones now, might re-do this track with some breaks and builds and stuff for variation. Thanks again for the review bro, people like you are the reason i improve every day.

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Nov 26, 2015
5:03 PM EST
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9.5 MB
4 min 9 sec

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