could be ok
the mixing of your loops is kinda bad....and the percusion you used is not so great. later in the song you have this ridiculous percusion section. not liking that at all. the synths arent to bad its just the weak percussion.
Yeah this was just a song I made a loooooong time ago but I figured it wouldn't hurt to throw it on NG, actually I have a few like that, that's why the dates are all so funky lol. Anyways thank you for the review, I appreciate critism as much, if not more, than appraisal:)
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