Nice concept, needs a lot of work lol.

1.) Try not to leave percussion by its-self too much, unless its a pretty good beat (not solid quarter notes)

2.) I like what you tried to do with the 6/8 melody and the 4/4 drums, but it didn't quite work. Maybe turning the tempo up would help.

3.) I like your samples and instruments! Plus pretty good for a first track. Don't be afraid to experiment a little bit, just look over it and see where it needs improvement.

Overall, Good idea, 'Meh' for the outcome.