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Author Comments

This goes out to all those who can make really good pasta.


wow. i did not expect that. this was actually really good. the only fault i can really put on it is the transitions. the cymbals should be louder. that and that this isnt a loop so i can listen to it forever. nice job!

I like all the synths, especially the bass. The drums sound clear and firm; you did a good job individually compressing each instrument. However, the song itself has too much compression. I had to listen to this at half of my usual volume. There should be a transition at 1:59. At the very least, you could have faded out the drums. This song becomes tiring to listen to after 2 minutes. There is some variety in the notes, effects, and synths, but I wanted to hear more rhythmic variety; changing the instruments is not enough. In addition, the melody became repetitive quickly and you went back to it after the break. I could be wrong, but it seems like there might be enough room in the mix to squeeze in a high frequency lead for counter-melodies.

I absolutely love the melodies and effects that were added to provide a little spice and variety. I really hate to say it but the beat right at the beginning sounds a little canned until it gets to the meat of the music, so perhaps cut the intro down a couple of measures to make just enough setup for the theme would smooth out the beginning better. Just a little bit of constructive criticism, take it with a grain of MSG. Otherwise, really really good 4/5

FinaLee responds:

Don't sweat it. I always take constructive feedback into account for my newer works! I was really happy with how everything sat well in the mix, but I think it's because there is a bit more minimalism in this one than in my older works. That might be why it sounds like it needed a minute to get everything situated. Thanks for the review!

5 starts boi, this gave me chills. I love the beat and the melodies you put.

Aww, but I can only make really okay pasta :(

Well this sure is an interesting piece. I think the sounds design is pretty darn awesome. Once the real melodies start floating in, they've got some nice flow too. The mixing is splendid as well. All the creativity that went into this piece is pretty amazing. So much unique and unconverntional stuff going on o.O
And somehow, the track still manages to be structured :/

The sound at the end is just brilliant to top it off. Easy favorite :p

FinaLee responds:

Yay! Thanks as always for the kind words, LSD!

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Credits & Info


4.31 / 5.00

Nov 21, 2015
4:39 PM EST
Video Game
File Info
7 MB
3 min 5 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.