*THAT DROP THO!* *WOOP WOOP* *YAS*
nice melody, like it... ish... not rly
I understand this is your 1st song so imma gonna give you some: *TOP TIPS*
there are 2 builds... which is just NEIN, ITS MADNESS
the second melody, i'm not sure if u intended that to be a bass, if so make it lower.
THE_DROP! is... it.... yeh, its needs some work.
M8 u have a long road ahead. I still do too but here are some tips:
EQ Dat bass a bit.
Put effects on your sounds, there a bit dry. I recommend chorus or reverb.
The melody is a bit piercing.
Its a bit off key.
The instruments don't blend well.
You will get better as you go along, believe me, my first song was worse than this. Work hard and try new techniques.
Sick Wubz M69