I can't really criticize due to the context you're posting this in, but this was your first song ever?! Dear god my first was so much worse it makes me cringe, but I don't think I have the guts to post mine. Props.
Thanks for this, I'm sure urs isn't that bad anyway (not as bad as this)
First track? Well then... It sucks ass... kind of. But it's your first track ever. It's ok.
...well...that's nice...kind of.
Glad to see you are alive, I won't criticize this too much because it was your first track, I just want to tell you your friends were kind of right, but I've heard plenty of worse songs. Keep up your style with tracks I've seen previously!
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