AMAZING! The part when the strings come in is so emotional. I wish it was longer! Hopefully you can extend it with a very powerful emotional string ensemble at the end. This piece can become a masterpiece!

First thing - that reversed string..I think? Sounds awesome
I Don't know why the strings go down in amplitude - as if they are side chained? It grew on me as it went, but quite odd. If it was used as an effect then ignore that comment.

I could see this track longer and the strings could really bring a strong element to the mix. but alas, a minute is all I get.
Good mix though. Great work!