No more cutting out.. lolz. I think you should of had a more diverse hi hat pattern, cus the drums werent changing much. The bass arp blended nicely with the drums, and the melody and synths or strings or whatever, were nice too. I think the song needed like a climax, and the drums needed work too, but overall good song. I liked it better then the calm.
It's really good. Like the beginning, and then it switches moods. One suggestion would be to make the drums heavier.