First thing that cane to my mind criticism-related was the bassline. It was too loud at the beginning, at least to me, but when the song started to pick up the problem fixed itself.

The song is also really repetitive, which can get annoying. No amount of added instruments will spice it up after 3 and a half minutes of the same melody. Mix things up or add a second melody to alternate to, or something.

I really want to like this song, but it's just the same thing for almost 6 minutes. The melody is cool, but it overstays its welcome.

3.5/5 Stars

-QJrocks