Although I think like psycho That it could have benefited from no splash SFX thing at the start I still think it's a pretty and in its own way charming song love the change at 3:00 really establishes what the song is for me and that's a great song would have been 4.5 haven't it been for splash thing sorry for the harsh judgement almost however you still did great to me!
Not bad. The intro would have done better without the "big splash" at the opening and it only started with the percussion. It feels over saturated at the beginning & would have benefited a lot from a cleaner intro.
On an unrelated note, I've never played Undertale. A game I'd recommend would be LISA: the Painful RPG & the DLC LISA: the Joyful. Good stuff.
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