It was pretty good, I dunno, I kinda annoyed me how the drums weren't played during the melody. And it could use a sub-bass. Other than that it was fine I suppose.

Sound sharp throughout the whole song, kinda of hurts my ears to be honest. One suggestion is that you put more bass and melody into your songs or some kind of pattern; it sounds uninspired and uninteresting.. It's a good start though; the drums, along with the chords sound alright.

Not bad!!!!!

Good! :3

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