Dude, this sounds really good! It sounds super original and awesome! I feel like you could have elaborated on some of the cooler sounds, like the upward moving arp at 3:14. Also the ending could have been less abrupt and more of a conclusive finish. Good work, though!
Author Comments
This was a scrap song I was planning on getting rid of it but I wanted to see everyone's feedback. I hope you enjoy.
DjDragonfire responds:
Thanks so much and you are right that arp did need to be elaborated and the end was abrupt thanks for the feedback! ;]
Credits & Info
You might also enjoy…
DjDragonfire 
Licensing Terms
You may only use this piece for commercial purposes if your work is a web-based game or animation, otherwise you must make specific arrangements with the artist.
