Nice track
So first of all you have a decent voice and it seems to flow out just right the lyrics to this particular piece seem to work to so nice effort on this I like the energy you put into this and hope you continue making stuff like this and improving every day because this was not perfect but still has lots of potential so keep doing what you do best I enjoyed your effort here I look forward to even more
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some small polish on the voice but not by much
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