you got something going there. But I do think that you need to do some work on it. The quality is so so it sounds like you got an filter over the entire song. I know it's not easy to get that right, but toy around with the EQ and soon you'll discover some tricks. (I could share some if you want). And well some parts of the song isn't really to my taste. but overall a good idea, just needs some polishing and it will be great:)
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