Awesome

thanx for the reviews and feedback and this is a very catchy song and i cud definantly c it in am intro or like the first level of an rpg type game

Hm...

Well... yes you've mentioned that it's choppy. There are so rough cuts in the melody that they are quite disturbing for me. I think for a relaxing and calm classical audio requires a constant melody, avoiding any such hard changes.

Are you working with FL? If yes you should out some attack on the samples. You'll see that it'll make them sound more softer and peacefull. They will come in with a bit fade in - I think a calm song could use this.

The drum beat I think was a wrong choose for this. Some solid snare or softer drum could be better. But the other instruments were fitting into it I think. In case of choir I say the same as for the strings. Bit more attack on them.

But don't be dissapointed - I think you got good melody writing skills. I liked the melody - altough the first half had a dissonant moment (as good as I could hear). The ending of the song - viewing in the perspective of the melody was greatly done.

So summing up: I can feel that this is an early classical try but it's not that worst. Keep practising and things will improve.

Neat

Hey scout-zero.

I had to find you man, I hoped you would tell me if you started uploading stuff >:(.

Oh well, onto the review.

The song is hopeful sounding, but it is calm, and it is conveys that emotion effectively. Have you considered a flute to accompany that image?

The melody flows pretty well, I would advise using percussional works in a piece of this nature, it doesn't really fit too well.

Oh well, good stuff, keep them coming!