Well, it certainly seems more fitting for Valentine's Day than Halloween. ;) It's catchy, humorous, well-structured, and smooth-flowing. I enjoyed the vocal harmonies a lot, as that gives the piece a pretty nice, full texture. I suppose at some point I would like to see you take some more stylistic risks (you do the bare-bones guitar, vocals, and body percs thing a lot). The piece was also a little long, especially compared to most of your other work. Still, you did a good job of telling a story with the lyrics. Keep it up, Ceevro. ;)