Awesome. I love this a lot. Im glade I came up with the title ;D Well, at any rate you are awesome at this and you can only get better from here on Im sure.
I like dance songs, and this had a great kick snare, followed by a nice plucky instrument if nothing else. So the guitar was ok, but a bit out of sync. The thing at 20 seconds was way too jerky, I guess the delay was not played with enough. Also the melody was not really added to in the last part but still nice drums.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.