Don't you wish it could all just stop?
Flowing smoothly yet loudly.
You've got a good melody and chord progression. It conveys your song message very well. The only major flaw for this track is its volume which causes severe treble. If you fix this problem, you get at least +2 points from me. :)
Dramatic but the volume level...
... well it was waaaay too loud. In my opinion the song could be much better and enjoyable if the volume level of the piano wouldn't be soo loud. I understand what you tried to achieve - showing dramatic and a kind of epic emoitions.
But because of the loudness the sound made a distortion and made it less enjoyable.
To say something positive: I loved the melody - it's really good and absolutly fits for the title and the song description. The structure was also good: no boring, repetitive parts there was always something changing.
But that volume level needs to be fixed. It could be a 9 or even a 10 score for it. But keep it up - this stuff and you have potential in it.
First of all, thank you for your comments on the actual music. But yeah, the volume, it happened when I was downconverting and I still couldn't figure out how to save the sound quality. Until I get a real mic the only thing I can suggest is turn your volue down :/
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
Ben-the-Jew 
