This actually sounds very good. You used free voices from FL studio? I like only the background music. The voices aren't combined very well, but it sounds okay. Just make sure next time to just a little bit cut those voices before putting them together. Keep up with good work!

Loops well. At the end of the day this is just some catchy loop though. It's technically done well. I'd like to hear something new from you. You know what you do well... but what do you stay away from when making music? I'd be interested to hear you do something you don't normally do... something you can't do quickly.

did you flick your wrist