err, the pads at the beggining are standard fl pads, therefore very crappy and they cut off at every note...you probably should have used diffrent sounds. and when the melody kicks in, none of the patterns really go together in harmony >.<
work on putting them in the same key. and you have like 3 sounds just doing the same thing. the pluck is nice, but doesnt really go with the somber mood of the song, sounds more like a sunny kind of thing.
anyway, im being too negative. it definetly does sound sort of ambient, like i said it has a cool somber mood. keep practicing, explore more of fruity loops, but dont submit your expirements. try to make the song more diverse too, not just the same things over and over. good luck in the future, check some of my stuff out too!
Thanks for the detailed review. I'll try and take some you're advice and i'm going to check out your music now.