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Hey guys! This is custom work for TheMasterOfTheGamez's channel (www.youtube.com/channel/UCI_j_BPCu8qs0c-RKp2UrWA), for his intro. This one was inspired by Heartthrob a little bit. Okay, maybe a "little bit" isn't accurate (I even used the same vocal from Heartthrob). Hope you guys enjoy!

At the request of Benjamin Jones, this song is excluded from my OST rule, which means you can use it! As long as you credit me though. :P

Credit to sjlmr3 for making the Sidechain Riser! www.looperman.com/loops/detail/879…ectronic-fx-loop

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QJrocks

2015-10-07 21:00:13

The chords are strong with this one... I like it :D

The vocal from :22 to :30 is out of tune with the rest of the song and is very out of place.

The melody is very nice, I like how you have multiple instruments compounding to make something awesome. The drumbeat is audible, which is good. The only thing you're missing is again, the bassline. It's much more forgivable this time, but not having a bassline makes it fall short of music legend. A choir or two in the drop could have made all the difference.

The vocals REALLY don't fit with this song at all. They all seem to be somewhat off-key.

I'm sorry, but the out-of-place, off-key vocals are so distracting from the awesome main melody that I'm goint to have to drop my score by 1 star. Getting rid of the vocals and adding a bassline at the drop would have made this song perfect.

-QJrocks

Evilgrapez responds:

Okay, well, thanks for your feedback! "The chords are strong with this one." Ha, that's a good line. I just watched Star Wars recently, in fact. :P

Anyways, yeah, I could have done something to put the vocals on-key. Never really crossed my head though. TheMasterOfTheGamez did think it was good as it was when I sent it to him though, so I made that the final copy. I guess it looks like my main weakness with songs is baselines. You'll just have to manage with the new songs I'm gonna upload.

Thanks for your review!

albertosw18

2015-10-07 11:36:18

en conjunto buena composicion bro!

Evilgrapez responds:

Muchas gracias por tus comentarios! :D

(esto fue traducido utilizando Google Translate Por cierto, lo siento si estoy hablando un poco raro)