The chords are strong with this one... I like it :D
The vocal from :22 to :30 is out of tune with the rest of the song and is very out of place.
The melody is very nice, I like how you have multiple instruments compounding to make something awesome. The drumbeat is audible, which is good. The only thing you're missing is again, the bassline. It's much more forgivable this time, but not having a bassline makes it fall short of music legend. A choir or two in the drop could have made all the difference.
The vocals REALLY don't fit with this song at all. They all seem to be somewhat off-key.
I'm sorry, but the out-of-place, off-key vocals are so distracting from the awesome main melody that I'm goint to have to drop my score by 1 star. Getting rid of the vocals and adding a bassline at the drop would have made this song perfect.
-QJrocks
Evilgrapez 
