It's interesting, but too muddy sounding to really draw any attention to it, especially at the beginning where drawing a listeners attention is more vital. At that point it sounds literally like noise with some kind of fast backing beat, but you can hardly tell what's going on due to the EQing, unless you listen really intently at the noise. And by that time you've probably already lost the attention of your listener.

If you'd like, I can take a look at it, as I have FL Studio, and see if I can make it a bit better sounding. I'm by no means a professional, but I do have a little experience. If you're interested, shoot me a PM.