Right off the bat i actually really like your percussive intro although i think it drops in the instuments a bit suddenly. I try to do everything in 4 bar increments when it comes to a build like this and filter automatons are definitely your friend in this situation. All in all your structure is very unorthodox to say the least. I would certainly work a lot more on your progression. Although it probably doesn't sound like very good advice coming from an artist, try to study how other people approach their builds in the specific genre you're trying to work and break it down into sections, see what works well and try to include different sections like "Bridges" and "breakdowns" atleast once a track. Of course this is all a matter of opinion though. The melodies in this track were nice but seemed kind of bland by the time you got to the end. That being said I actually really enjoyed the section at 1:30, sounded quite experimental which i liked.
Overall pretty solid track, would work on structure and transitions most of all.
Instantly thought of 5-Hour Energy. Very Club worthy song though! Nice Job with variety!