Before I start this review, I would like.to mention that I am a real dick when it comes to reviewing audios... Thank you!

First thoughts:
This was very slow for a dance song. The drums were very simple, I would have perfered more complicated mixes.
At 1:16 I finally had the vibe of a dance song. But you lost the drums, or at least you made them extremely quiet. And the pattern was very simple. At 1:16 I would like to mention that I liked your chord progression. I really enjoyed the synth at 1:49. It reminded me on an old song called Popcorn by hot butter. It was one of the first times a synth was used to make a song. I'm sorry, but I have ran out of time to have a larger review... but I would like to give this 4/5 stars! (Because I realize that I am way to critical with reviews and songs)

nothin'... nothing to say... but... AWSOME!!!