I'll be honest for all ym reviews.
This track start out pretty powerful, although I don't like the kick, it's not strong enough. I would suggest having one be a LOW end kick, and one be a HIGH end, to give it that deep punchy feel. Maybe cutting the freq at 60HZ for the low subbass kick.
The melody is boring, I've heard millions of variations of it in millions of songs. It really didn't go anywhere. The track has a nice drive but it feels static throughout the track. The saws are too weak and don't give it that uplifting feel.
Composition is alright, one problem is that right after a drumroll, the melody cuts off. Maybe it's a loop?
In The end the track is boring and has no percussion elements, in example claps, highats, or bongos. The saw sounds dry, melody is uninspired. needs more layering sounds too empty as it is.
The only momet I like is the build up at 1:27 but that's it.
Sorry for sounding like a jerk but I'm honest.