This song is pretty good overall, but there are a few things that stand out. A lot of this is negative, and highly opinionated, so apologies in advance.
The glitchy effects in this song are pretty interesting. They do sound out of place in a few parts, though. It's a bit hard to explain. One thing I disliked was the way that the synth introduced at 0:30 is an octave higher in the right ear. It's a creative idea, but painful to listen to. Another thing I didn't like was how the bass sound comes in at 1:03 and 2:33 - too loud, too sudden. Your drums are mostly okay, except for the snare which sounds a little weak.
The overall melodies and stuff are, for the most part, pretty unremarkable. It's decent, but only decent. It might be a good idea for you to prioritise learning about music theory.
The overall structure of the song is good. The intro is pretty solid, but I thought the ending was slightly lacking because it sounds like someone is hitting the piano keys rather than gently playing them, if you get what I mean. The resulting sound is slightly unnatural. The piano is nice throughout the rest of the song though, especially at 2:25.
Putting all the negativity aside, I think you have some good ideas going on. I also get the impression that you put a lot of effort into making this song. How much time did you spend on it?