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I've tried myself in a new (for me) genre. I hope I did it better than my older tracks. Any feedback is appreciated. Cheers :)


You made a request to the Review Request Club a month ago. Sorry for the late review X3:

The main melody is amazing. I love it! I also like the lead synth you use.

There's a couple of things to pick on from the resto f your song though. First of all, the first 12 seconds of the song is very stale and boring. By adding in some reverby sound effects or just add some high notes to your piano chords. Personally, I would also add "transition notes" between the chords. Like instead of going directly from one chord to another, you add a chord in between to make the transition smoother. Also, I didn't really enjoy the sounding of the piano you use. Too much low end in the eq.

This leads into the other problem in your track, the eq. After listening through your song, I get the impression that you either have done no eq'ing at all, or have just used it to boost certain frequencies for certain instruments. I would really advice you to learn and master the art of eq'ing. It's probably the most important thing too learn if you want to increase the quality of your music.
Cut some low end from the piano, and cut some of the highest frequencies of the sine lead as a beginning. The trick is that you don't want the lead to sound worse than it did before the eq, but you want to remove the frequncies that makes the synth sound bad as a start.

The bassline and piano doesn't go well together btw. I don't know if there is some detune on the bass or not, but the bass sounds false in comparison to the piano chords at some points.
Also, a tip for the piano chords, I don't think those are the best chords to bring out the full potential of the melody. The first chord sounds right, but the other 3 are pretty off in comparison to the chords. Try experimenting with different chords.

Overall a song with some really good ideas, but I feel like it could have been done better. Hope you don't think too much of the rating. I do the RRC to help out people , and I feel like the best way to do that is by being as strict as possible.

Thanks for requesting a review from the:
{Review Request Club]

Awe2K responds:

Thanks for the review, will do my best to make next songs a bit better :)

Edit: it is actually not my best song, one of my first

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Sep 19, 2015
12:27 PM EDT
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2.7 MB
2 min 22 sec

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