I think you have a lot of potential, but this song does infact need some work, It sounds a bit forced, like you were trying to make a dark song be happy, and it didn't really work, and I felt like the drop wasn't very good either. No disrespect, just giving some helpful tips for the future.
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Bazz123 responds:
I really apreciate the tip! Thanks. I have had to put one scale down to the melody and do a diverse drop but I was forced (as you said)
Umm... That bass sounded like a bunch of feedback. I honestly don't think it sounded that great, and probably would have rated it a 2 star song, but I don't want to be a hater. I like the ideas put into this song though! Good job! :D
-Applesnitch
Bazz123 responds:
Thanks for the review I understand u I used that bass really bad but really good at same time
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