well for DnB
the drum beat is more it for an into not the entire thing
the bassline does not fit at all in my opinion mostly because its too quiet and not heavy enough in the mid section
also the FX........don't use them trust me
transitions are a little weird though
the bells are not that great, as in they don't mix well
this seems more like an experimental kind of song
also the ending was really sudden, you should have either ended it on a stretched note or faded it all out or looped it
not to be the asshole who calls shit out but are you using MMM?
i you are then message me your email im going to hook you up with something if you like
when i was your age i used MMM then i stopped and went for FL studio
much better system to work with, that or reason by propellerhead