First, loved the intro. The carnival vibe lent some novelty to the track. When it got into the techno portion of the song, I was still hooked for a while. What kept throwing me off was the sense that not all the instruments were playing in time with one another. I'm a percussionist, so things like that bug me. Still not a bad song though. I'd like to hear this one again if it were cleaned up a bit. I really liked the synth tone too, by the way. Keep at it.
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