I'm not saying it's REALLY good, It's just that it's not my style, man. I think this is actually pretty well done.
I,m sorry, but something suck in your music. The clarity is really bad. I think you have to work on it! It seen like to be a good idea, but...
Ouch...Hmm...I've done much better before, and now that I realize it, it is true, I blew it, yet if you want to say something, finish your idea, it's not like I'll go all mad on you unless you come to me with some random nonsense, I'll keep practicing.