Yea i see you use FL. the melody is cool, but i have a few things to say. The 'For-evvver' is wayyyy of key, it hurt my ears, man. and the drum loop you put in sticks out and cuts short. also, when the sound changes and becomes lower and brassier, each pitch takes too long, and the 2nd and 3rd ones are of key. The melody is really simple (but catchy),and you over use it too much. The song is not diverse enough, you cant just keep repeating/alternating the 2 melodies, it gets boring after a while. any, I will give you a solid 3, and a download.
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Thanks for the review! I know, I know. But I'm only 13 with a simple mind... >_<