This is a bunch of sour noises you made with your voice cracks, could have done so much more with the original tag.
You didn't really mention the music itself.
Anyways, I tend to use an avant-garde/outsider style of singing. It's very deliberate and there is technique behind it. Although, I can understand why you dislike it.
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