Pretty exciting to hear where you were going with this one.
Great playing, great progression and an awesome guitar tone too! The direction just takes me to a zone of evilness (if that even makes any sense).
It's a bit of a shame you've had to compromise with those basic EZDrummer drums. Personally, I think you could've gotten a lot better sound out of them with the right tools.
Would've also loved to hear a solo too!
Great job on the whole though, definitely worthy of a head nod in appreciation!