Wow Nice Song, For a WIP its better than OK Dude. Well Done.
But one Think, Please use lower melody sounds.
Even for a WIP, it sounds pretty professional to me, maybe you re-equalize a bit the high frequencies, sometimes they sound too loud. Except for that, great work! I can see some potential here, those arpeggios are awesome, they fit perfectly with the pad sounds you put on the middle. Keep it up!
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Yes, i have to re-equalize high frequencies. Thank you for review.