The vocals are actually amazing, they are still a bit ammature sounding, but i think thats just filters. You are obviously discovering new techniques for blending your vocals with the music. You did a really good job making it blend oh so nice, i am not going to lie dude i really like this song. Your voice is nice to, i cant wait to hear more from you, but ide like to ask a big favour.
I would maybe like to use this in one of my series i do on youtube, i am pretty small time. Let me know or drop me message with your social meeds for credits if you give me the go ahead.
Amazing song, bravery and dedication shows, did you spend alot of time on this? cause i would not doubt it.