Nah, doesn't need any more pausing, TV and radio news scripts are written to fit in between commercials +/- a few seconds. Very clear, concise, well intonated! Audio was clear, clean and pop-free, though it did sound like it needed more of a mid/lower-range boost, but only slightly... that's something the client can tweak if necessary.
I'll have to look more into tweaking the levels before I upload next time, every little suggestion like that really helps.
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