You need to work on your mastering, sounds really over compressed. The mixdown needs work too, the synths are way too loud compared to the kick. To get the mix right, try using Hardstyle tracks you really like as references. The arrangement is good. Not fond of the melody, found it a bit boring but that's just my personal tastes. Keep making music though, you got the potential.
I love the hardstyle kick :)
From 1:42, bass ate the whole thing though :/ but that can be fixed easily! (you stayed up until 4 am so it's ok, your ears got sleepy too)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.