Al fin lo encontré otra vez :)
So my submission took more than i expected, i wanted it to be top notch heh This time i experimented with languages!! have a classic rock song about the isolation of the Berlin wall! (Or well, that's what i tried to express, my sis helped me tog et the lyrics right since she is the one who knows to speak German)
Music, Lyrics and Production: NyxTheShield (Felipe Montero)
Main Vocals: Valentina Montero (My Sis)
Back Vocals: Constanza Gac (Sys's friend lol)
I hope you enjoy it ^^
Al fin lo encontré otra vez :)
This is really good! i love the sound when you slide through the frets
That's a really good piece of music, it's simply beautiful. I'm from Germany myself but didn't grow up in this time (glad that I didn't grow up there). I don't understand the lyrics sometimes, I think because it's sung with an italic accent (nothing wrong with that) ^^ I also relate to some of the aspects already said by "TaintedLogic" just that you mustn't read almost the same again ^^
4,5/5 -Schinkn
Beautiful, a little minus because I really wanted to hear the vocals ^^' I hope you're okay with that :/
Hahah i am glad you liked it !!
I like the easy, feel-good guitar sound at the beginning. Sounds like a montage played over the images of a lone traveler across a wide-open plain. I thought it was a little hard to follow the rhythm during the intro, and a hat or kick to keep the beat would've helped (but that's a tiny detail). The vocals work really well, and sound really good. I would suggest providing the lyrics (in English, please), because, well, it's hard to judge them if I can't understand what they're saying. I noticed some repeated sections in the piece, but otherwise it was kind of hard to discern the structure of the piece from around the 1 - 3 minute mark. I would try adding some percussion and/or heavy guitars during the refrain to help contrast the verse and the chorus. I also think the drums could've been a bit louder throughout. Still, that guitar solo at 2:50 is awesome. I didn't think the piece was terribly conclusive (maybe it would've been more conclusive if I knew what she was saying at the end, though!). I'll admit that I do love the smooth, almost soothing vibe this has. I know this isn't really what you were going for, but it sounds like the vocalist is almost trying to calm down this weary traveler. :) I think you really captured what you were going for genre-wise, though: it definitely has a pre-90s, edgeless guitar sound that I really like. I think it's an important point that I'm able to capture the emotion in this piece without knowing what the lyrics mean. :) The solo at 2:50 also adds quite a bit of structural relief that otherwise, tbh, is a little bit lacking in this piece. Overall, though, this is really solid work. Nice job, NyxTheShield! :D
9/10
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.