Sounds good, but some parts are messed up indeed. You have good melodies and all, but when they come in, they just seem to slide in at the wrong time. Try to vary that up a bit and I think you will have one hell of a song here.
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i liked the melodies and everything.
i think if you put everything together a little different;y it would be more pleasing to the ears.. cause some instruments just drop outta nowhere, and come in outof nowhere..
great melodies though!
i like that little vocal