I love the intensity and the vibrato in your voice. It can be really hard to record layered vocals like this and, given that fact, I thought you did a pretty good job. I really like the rebellious, western vibe this piece had, as established by the soulful guitar at the end. The reverb effects also enhanced the mood here, making me picture a wandering minstrel screaming across the plains, his voice bouncing off of distant mountains! :O I'm also impressed with your vocal range, and I think you should definitely keep working on this, man! Good luck! ;)