I'll almost only say that my favourite part is
[00:00 - 02:45].
This is because the melody is hard for me to
follow... (don't ask why DX)
But completely constructively, not subjectively:
there is too much long-lasting high frequency in
the reverb, also that is delayed, that after a while
have built up into noise.
This is not necessarily bad, just i noticed, that
this can feel weird.