I like it, but it doesn't flow as well as what I am used to. I guess that's just metal, but I think if you could improve your transitions it would sound less segmented. I am also used to metal voices being a bit more intrusive - maybe I shouldn't be using earphones? The equilibrium messes with the sound quite a bit. Regardless of my quirky interpretation, it's a very solid tune.
Hey thanks for the review. I can definitely understand the points you have made and vocals is a very new thing to me so I might have gone mad to make them unique! Thanks again dude, every point is an improvement I can make for next time.