Considering you're unscouted, and still working out your style and quirks of things...you did a pretty good job. I do agree with iRaider, the violin is abrasive as hell in the beginning, but other than that, the piece is pretty good. You do have a few sections where your instruments don't tie in well with each other and leave subtle skips/gaps.
No one's perfect and it takes a bit of fine tuning to get it just right! Keep practicing and working out those nasty flaws as they say! 4/5 for you! Keep it up!
Here be DRAGONS!!... Hahaha, L-55 Good Job =)
In my opinion the song would be better without the first 20 seconds as the violin is very abrasive and doesn't flow well. Other than that I really like it.
sounds like music maker am! thats what i make tracks with :P. nice one! beginning was bland to me
The beginning is not that good but 2hen further in the song it becomes better 4.75 stars
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